My Editing Presentation

My Editing Presentation: (the Editing went wrong so there was a delay in render)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fGRWuqeHLvA&feature=youtu.b
In this video, because the editing became such a annoying part of this video (Which was mainly because of software's and connection) it caused the video to render slowly and then not upload quick enough.

When Making this I made sure that I would keep to the facts that it was about editing so I kept going back to that subject.
I do not know the script for this video because I wanted to give an honest on the spot opinion, because if I was to write it then I could easily research more and then it wouldn't be my opinion then.